Please consider that the debate in Brussels about the NN is quite advanced. A deliberation of the Parliament is expected by April 3rd.
In my opinion, it would be much easier to propose the rejection of the entire NN proposal rather than propose amendments.
In any case, the key person for a counter proposal is the rapporteur of Socialists, namely Mrs. Trautman (French). Trautmann tabled an amendment which do not succeed in ITRE committee. 
Allo Liberals (who are split on this subject)  and Greens (who would like to reject the proposal) may be of help.

Let me know if I should help to arrange something.

Inno

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Il giorno 20/mar/2014, alle ore 15:25, Jim Reid <jim@rfc1035.com> ha scritto:

On 20 Mar 2014, at 14:18, Meredith Whittaker <meredithrachel@google.com> wrote:

Would it make sense to do a quick write-up, explaining the technical
difficulties/impossibilities of implementing what is currently (vaguely)
defined in the draft, and requesting clarity and technical specifics?

Yes, I think so. Who will do this though and make sure it gets to the right place in Brussels?